How do you mean, @AgentPete? I gave it no less than six rereading and editing passes before I started sending it out, if that's what you mean...
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CageSage
Reading as a reader, with no idea where the journey of this story will take you, is not like reading as a writer, worrying about how to get to the end with the message intact. I can't read as a reader until a beta reader says something that kickstarts that side of the brain, then I use 'method acting' to become someone else, and read the story again, with nothing in the head searching for 'fix it' moments. Not easy.