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The confident person considers themselves pretty perfect too. Not in the sense that there's nothing to improve - they find ways to do that daily. But in the sense that they know they are always 'good enough'. And that their worth isn't dependant...

An arrogant person considers himself perfect. This is the chief harm of arrogance. It interferes with a person's main task in life - becoming a better person. Leo Tolstoy

“Two powerful, little words I've learned to use when facing challenges, fears, and doubts—so what?” Richelle E. Goodrich

Hi! I’m a newbie writer and so far I’m working on a debut novel called Out of Body. Thank you for your responses and helping me out! It’s a paranormal thriller so far I reached my goal of 10,000 words 👏

I am new here! I have taken down the pdf because it needs to be posted on the lab (so I have been told) Do you happen to remember the title or author? I'd love to look it up and see how they handled the concept?

Oh Gosh! I remember the scene (and only read the first chapter), but this was easily 4 years ago because I remember reading it at my old house. It may still be in The Lab if its writer didn't delete it.

“When I lose my temper, honey, you can't find it any place.” Ava Gardner

Welcome aboard, Dani :) there are a few thriller writers here. Have you been on Litopia before? because I've read that type of beginning before (the one you describe in the blurb). I haven't read the pages yet.

“A book is a living thing. It is a bird; it has a voice. The pages of a book are wings. Books have heartbeats. When readers read they feel them; they listen.” Suzy Davies

Hi Dani, Welcome to Litopia. I'm glad you're happy with your first chapter and ready for critique, BUT I would urge you to take it down from this thread as it isn't secure or private from the rest of the internet. It can be found by anyone on a...