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Fanfare! Songs for Beginners wins the Goldfinch Novel Award

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Needless to say, I am thrilled.

Here's what judge agent Orli Vogt-Vincent had to say about it:

SONGS FOR BEGINNERS had me from the very first page, with a first line that was irresistible. This was truly a pleasure to read, with a central protagonist who is as endearing, unique and believable as her childhood literary heroines. SONGS FOR BEGINNERS is vividly set in a particular time and place, beginning in the 1970s - what unfolds from there is a confident and bold voice, and a truly addictive story. Hannah and Neil are completely believable from the moment we meet them, and their relationship is beautiful to read, as well as Hannah’s relationship with her beloved Nain. What is particularly notable about this storytelling is that it is unpredictable: the author consistently makes choices that the reader does not expect, and this is a story that thrills in its surprising choices. We follow these characters from their early teens until the end of university, and Hannah’s coming of age is written in a tender, sensitive and charming manner, untangling themes of what it means to find yourself as a woman, as a sexual being, and as a human, particularly when you feel that you are different from others. I adored the way in which the author wove in music and literature as constants throughout Hannah’s growing up, because you can also see how these references have influenced the writing itself.

Overall, this was an impressive novel exploring youth, family, feminism, how we forge our identities in the world, and what it really means to love. It might be best expressed with a line from the novel itself: “She was happy, more or less,” a line which sums up the confusion and thrill of becoming an adult in a wonderfully unique and lifelike way


Massive debt of gratitude to @Rachael Burnett and @Claire G and all the other Lab critters who helped in the early stages.
 
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Whoopie!!! I'm just thrilled for you!! Stoked! So deserved :) What happens next? Onwards and upwards!
 
You should definitely submit to her
Absolutely. Looking at her profile, we have many common literary interests.

But it won't be the usual query letter seeing as she's already read the full MS. Do I still need to do the whole pitch n blurb? Or more: thank you, this is where I am in my writing career and do you want to represent me?

Anyone got any tips?
 
Absolutely. Looking at her profile, we have many common literary interests.

But it won't be the usual query letter seeing as she's already read the full MS. Do I still need to do the whole pitch n blurb? Or more: thank you, this is where I am in my writing career and do you want to represent me?

Anyone got any tips?
Hi Rachel,

I would send a query letter and just attach the full as a reminder and so she can take another look there and then, without having to bounce emails back and forward. Maybe introduce yourself as the author of the winning piece (attached) and expressing your delight. Then indicate how your taste aligns with hers - mention one or two of the books she says she admires on her profile (or represents if you can!). Perhaps a little pitch like: comparative titles/which novels you see yours sitting beside on bookselves; a tagline/elevator pitch to reinforce that the book can be presented to commissioning editors succinctly (though an agent may change this, it shows you have a bit of marketing savvy/awareness); and a little bit about yourself (including your other writing credentials and your aspirations as a writer) - before a polite sign off.

This would be your choice of course, but I would also include how your own experience informed how you represented/explored your MC, Hannah's, sexuality. It shows authenticity and that this is a kind-of-sort-of 'own voice' narrative.

I hope this helps. Free free to take or leave. I'm rooting for you!

C xx
 
Hi Rachel,

I would send a query letter and just attach the full as a reminder and so she can take another look there and then, without having to bounce emails back and forward. Maybe introduce yourself as the author of the winning piece (attached) and expressing your delight. Then indicate how your taste aligns with hers - mention one or two of the books she says she admires on her profile (or represents if you can!). Perhaps a little pitch like: comparative titles/which novels you see yours sitting beside on bookselves; a tagline/elevator pitch to reinforce that the book can be presented to commissioning editors succinctly (though an agent may change this, it shows you have a bit of marketing savvy/awareness); and a little bit about yourself (including your other writing credentials and your aspirations as a writer) - before a polite sign off.

This would be your choice of course, but I would also include how your own experience informed how you represented/explored your MC, Hannah's, sexuality. It shows authenticity and that this is a kind-of-sort-of 'own voice' narrative.

I hope this helps. Free free to take or leave. I'm rooting for you!

C xx
Brilliant advice!

Yes, I was thinking I still need something of a pitch and comps might be helpful especially if angled to her taste.

It hadn't occurred to me to include the full MS, but you're right, she might not have it to hand, or she may not have been able to keep it. One of the benefits of this competition was that the shortlist was very short (final four) as was the timescale, so it will be relatively fresh in her mind. I'd better strike while the clichéd iron is still hot.

Thanks so much for your help.
Neil says hi, by the way x
 
A bit behind the curve here and only just spotting this fantastic news!!!!!!!

Many congratulations, Rachel. Brilliant and very well deserved. What I read of the book in its early stages really jumped out at me as being classy stuff. It simply felt like a real book with real characters and a real story. I immediately forgot the circumstances under which I was reading and was completely engaged.

Delighted for you and wishing you every further success with the book. I'd love to see it become best seller.
 

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